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Dark Angels Note 41

Dearest friends,

Welcome back to our writerly thoughts to distract, inspire and reassure you. Be well, keep reading, keep writing and know that we’re always here.. 

1. Writing

Read the poem below by serial rulebreaker, ee cummings. Consider all the ways he disregards conventions in punctuation, language, spacing, structure, rhyme and metre. Next, reread the poem, but this time look for traditional poetic techniques. How many can you spot?

Now find a poem (or short work) that you’ve already written. Create another version where you throw out the rule book. Play with lawbreaking techniques and see how each new act of anarchy changes the shape and feeling of your piece. 

2. Reading [in Just-]

in Just-
spring          when the world is mud-
luscious the little
lame balloonman 

whistles          far          and wee and
eddieandbill come
running from marbles and
piracies and it's
spring 

when the world is puddle-wonderful 

the queer
old balloonman whistles
far          and             weea
nd bettyandisbel come dancing 
from hop-scotch and jump-rope and
it's
spring
and 
the 
goat-footed 
balloonMan          whistles

far
and
wee
ee cummings 

3. Sharing
Meanwhile

Tell me
what were those gold bright
gold light words
I can still see their glow on you

Don’t tell me
It’s that angel, whispering
You, listening
Me with no words, longing

Lee Ryan wrote this poem in response to a reading of Denise Levertov’s poem ‘Interim’ at our Tuesday night gathering. 

Smile
I miss your smile, already
I miss your smile.
A smile is what makes us human.

A smile makes us what we are
when we are most
what we are.

I smile at animals but
they don’t smile back at me.
A smile is a moment shared.

A smile cannot live in dead stone
or a flat canvas, but
a photograph captures the moment.

A smile is what makes us alive.
I look at your photograph and know
that I will always miss your smile.

John Simmons  

4. Gathering
Join us via Zoom for an hour of writing and talking with other Dark Angels. We meet at 7pm UK time every Tuesday. Click here on the night. There’s no need to register in advance and we’ll be using the same link every week from now on. There’s no charge. And feel free to bring a friend along. 

5. Workshopping
We’re adding new writing experiences to our calendar all the time. Here’s a quick recap.Starter DaysJoin us on either March 3rd or June 9th. Even if you’ve been before, these are playful and lively ways to refresh creative energy and sharpen skills. Find out more here.

Advanced Course
Throughout April, Jamie Jauncey and Richard Pelletier be leading a guided journey into language and storytelling with live online sessions. Details here

From everyone at Dark Angels